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Sunday, October 13, 2013
Author's Purpose - Christopher Columbus Biography
Authors can have various purposes for their writing. The author of the BrainPOP video on Christopher Columbus wanted to INFORM the reader about the life of Christopher Columbus. The author included information about Columbus’ contributions as well as some mistakes that Columbus made. In your post, list at least one positive character trait of Columbus that the author informed you about as well as one negative character trait. Be sure to use complete sentences with proper capitalization and punctuation. End your post with a sentence justifying your opinion of whether we should honor Columbus with a national holiday.
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One positive thing that he did is he was a good leder. One negative thing that he did was he took away the pepole food.I think we should make a holiday beacuse he explord
ReplyDeleteA positive character trait of Columbus is that he was kind to his mates and helped them not worry about falling out of the world.A negative character trait of Columbus is he was making the people slaves.I think we should do a holiday for Columbus because he is a great person and fixed his mistake and then was nice.
ReplyDeleteone good positive christfer culumbus toock care of his crew.
ReplyDeleteOne positive is that Columbus was very nice to his crew. A negative about Columbus is he was hurtful and mean to the Bahamas and took their food and stuff and Columbus made the Bahamas his slave. I think we should have a holiday for Columbus because he is a very good person and he really tried his best on traveling around the world. He did do bad stuff in the past but he is still a good person and I trust him very very much.
ReplyDeleteAnnie, I think you make some very good points. I hope you enjoyed your Columbus Day holiday!
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One positive of Columbus was he was brave and landed to different lands. One negative of Columbus was he was taking their gold. I think we should have a holiday because he was helping them and never gave up.
ReplyDeleteOne positive thing that Cristopher Columbus did was he never gave up on his journey.One negitive thing he did was he took the natives land and also made them slaves to queen Isabella.I think we should have a holiday because he was still a good leader and still did many positive things.He also inspired many peopole.
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DeleteI agree with you that Columbus was a good leader and inspired people to try new things - like sailing west!
Mrs. H.
this is one good thing about Columbus he did not gave Columbus was initiative because he sold gold.we should not have a holiday because he sold stuf.
ReplyDeletehe was brave.he was bad because he take some gold.i think we sould celebra columbus day
ReplyDeleteI hink we cond saibrat hem.he and was stileny gold and food and mony.he didn,t respek hes CORW
ReplyDeleteColumbus was a good person because he never gave up . and he has trouble because he go to another land and take there land and give it to the queen Isabella think we make a holiday because he make bad things and good things.
ReplyDeleteone positive thing about columbus was that he never gave up on his crew. the negitive thing about him was he made people slaves. I think we should selibrat columbus day beacuse he made up for his mastacs.
ReplyDeleteColumbus was good because he did not give up. he was bad because he stold gold. we sheld selebret hem because he helpet outher people.
ReplyDeleteOne bad thing that Columbus did was he took other peoples gold.One posted thing that he did was he never gave up on his trip.I think we should have a holiday because he is a very very very very good person to me.
ReplyDeletecolumbus was good becaus he never gave up and the bad ting was that he stow the gold away from the bahamas we shouid celebrate because he never gave up
ReplyDeleteclumbus was good beacause he is a good laeder.he was publish.i think i will celebrate beacause clumbus was helping witho other.
ReplyDeleteColumbus is good because he never gave up.He was bad because he stole gold. We should celebrate columbus day because he knew the erth was round
ReplyDeleteone positive thing about columbus. columbus was a god person because he never gave up.one bad thing is.he took gold from people.wye we should selibrate
ReplyDeleteOne good thing he did was a good leader. One negative thing he did was he took gold and made pepole his slave. It should be christafer columbus day because he was a good leader.
ReplyDeleteOne goog thing about Columbus is that he inspired his people.One bad thing about Columbus is that he made the natives slaves and he took his stuff too.I think we shouldint have a holiday because he made people slaves.
ReplyDeleteone thing about Columbus day is he never give up. one thing is not good is he make lots of mistake. i think we have a holiday because he make a good boy.
ReplyDeleteChristoper columbus was a good leader.A bad thing that he did was that he kept us natives as slaves.I think we should celebrate columbus day because he never gave up.
ReplyDeleteOne good thing about Columbus is,he was smart enough to sail West insted of East.One negiteiv thing about Columbus is,he made people hi slaves even children.I think we should have a Holiday beacause he was brilient to go west dont you think but he also made bad choises too.
ReplyDeleteOne good thing Columbus he told he crew to keep on going. One bad was that he did not know the people were Indian. Yes we should have a holiday to honor him.
ReplyDeleteOne good thing about Columbus was that he never gave up.One negative thing was that he took peoples money.I think that we should because he was a good leader.
ReplyDeleteOne good thing is that is he never gave up.And one bad thing is he made the nativis his
ReplyDeleteslaves.We should have a holiday to celbrat him.
One positive thing about Columbus never gave up. One bad thing is he took gold from then nativis.I think we should celeabrete Columbus day beacause he made mastacis.
ReplyDeleteOne good thing about Columbus was he was a good leader.One bad thing was he took people gold. I think we should have a holday because he help his crew.
ReplyDeleteOne good thing about Columbus is that he found out how to go to India without having to go on a long ride.One bad thing about Columbus is that he called the natives indians and took all of there gold and treated them like slaves.I think that we should not celebrate a whole day about Columbus he put the natives in slavery and took all of there jewels and gold.
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ReplyDeleteUna cosa buena que iso columbus fue que el busco una nueva manera ir a india.una cosa mala que iso culombus fue que el llevo cosas de las personas.yo quiero que vea un holiday porque el fue un buen lider
ReplyDeleteuna cosa buena de coiumbus es qeu cruso la siudad. y lo malo es que le isieron que aser.
ReplyDeleteuna cosa bien que iso columbos fue que cruso todo el mundo.una cosa mala que iso fue que llamo a los indios esclavos.yo digo que celebremos sobre el porque aunque iso algo malo podemos celebralo.
ReplyDeleteOne good thing about Columbus was that hewent to onother drection of the world.Critrfre colombes took over the land.He stold gold.
ReplyDeleteshud have a holiday for him.
one Good thing about combes is hi travel around the world. one baud colombes was hi tok treasures from the natives. I think we should .
ReplyDeleteone good ting about columbus hi trabol arond ti uerd. 0ne bad thing hi did uos hi tek gold. i tik we should have a holadaym
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ReplyDeleteone good thing about columbus is he traveled around the world. one bad thing about columbus is he takes gold from the natives.I think we SHOULD SELEBRATE COLUMBES DAY because he just make a little bit of mistakes.
i think it was nice of Chistapher Colombus to find an easier way to get to the new word.But it was not very nice of him to make the native Americans his slave.o think Christopher Colombus is a bully,but still with heart.
ReplyDeleteI could see how Christopher Columbus could be a hero to Spain. He did discover new land for his country and bring back some gold to help with money problems. I could also see how he could have been a bad person for the Native Americans. He took things from the land that didn't belong to him or even his country. I think he was a bad person. He did things that cannot be forgiven.
ReplyDelete"Hey guys lets take this land for ourselves!"what do I think of Christopher Columbus?Hmm,for one I think he was a big bully,He took land that wasn't his,he said he found it but people were already lived there.Christopher Columbus was a thief who stole gold from the natives,even if it was for the queen he should have at least had a good concious!I don't think Christopher Columbus should have a holiday for what he didn't do.
ReplyDeleteOne really great and helpful thing Christopher Columbus did is that he found a new route to South America without a new route,South America would have been found much later.One very horrible thing is that he took slaves! people should be free and live in peace.All in all , I think he was a bully.
ReplyDeleteOne of the nice things Christopher Columbus did was he obeyed his king and queen when they told him to explore a new route to Asia.One of the bad things Christopher Columbus did was when he landed on the Bahamas he tried to claim land even though people already lived there.I think Christopher Columbus is a hero because he had the perseverance to find a route to Asia even when people said he couldn't do it.
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